We had a fantastic writing lesson today. I hope you had a chance to talk to your student about it tonight. We started off the lesson by looking at some student example work that was very good. After that we started talking about character action. We made lists of words to describe how characters moved from one place to another, what characters could do with their hands, and what characters did with their face. I was going to have them write after this, but the lesson evolved into a lesson on non-verbal clues to a character's feelings.
During the course of making the list a student shared "raised an eyebrow" for something that a character could do with their face. I stopped to ask them what the character was feeling by knowing that they raised their eyebrows. We then went into some practice of trying to describe how the character was feeling by just using a description sentence. I was blown away by the examples that they gave.
These kids are great writers. They need to refine their thought process, but when they set out to craft a really good sentence they will blow you away. We will be working to highlight these successes and encourage students to work harder to naturally add this kind of detail into their writing.
I was very excited by the writing lesson and I think it is our best writing lesson in a couple of weeks. It was awesome to see everyone captivated and working hard. It can be difficult for students to understand how to make their writing better, but today was a great stepping stone towards more exciting description in their writing. I can't wait to build on this tomorrow.
